[Review] My hobby trip is making cartoons from faces

I need some kind feedback from all of you. Here is an image that I made, and I will update it in the comments column.

I need a review, what is lacking in my ability to draw cartoons and moral support to become a reliable cartoon design.

You can find it here: Contoh Desain

#1 Cartoon Face…

[Review] My hobby trip is making cartoons from faces